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Post by Veronica on Sept 2, 2007 5:55:56 GMT -5
This story contains not only Sam and Dean but will introduce two new characters. Veronica Swestock and Larissa Ryan. New Characters[/b][/size][/color]
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Post by jllove23 on Sept 2, 2007 9:36:08 GMT -5
Awesome. Can't wait to read it sweetie!!!
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Post by Veronica on Sept 2, 2007 9:51:33 GMT -5
i'll work on the first chapter later:) btw, have you noticed that there are more members now? but still no one has posted xD
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Post by jllove23 on Sept 2, 2007 11:04:17 GMT -5
I know!! People need to post!
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Post by Veronica on Sept 2, 2007 13:17:21 GMT -5
I posted banners of the new characters in the first post ^^
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Post by brookii on Sept 2, 2007 14:36:11 GMT -5
sounds great cant wait to read it!! UD soon
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Post by Veronica on Sept 7, 2007 3:25:39 GMT -5
Here's the first chapter, it's not so long though... Chapter One: PolaroidpictureLarissa Ryan stopped the car at the bottom of the hill. She picked up the polaroidcamera from the passengerseat and got out of the car. She walked to the front of the car and jumped up and sat down on the hood. She looked up at the top of the hill and felt a shiver as she looked at the big old mansion. It's dark facade looked intimidating in the night. Larissa smiled at her self. How could she be scared of a house? She picked up the polaroidcamera and took a picture of the house. She took the small piece that came out of the camera and waved it in the air as she thought for herself. "Schoolreporter Larissa Ryan is the first to enter the mansion at the top of Langdon Hill. The mansion is said to be haunted after the big accident that occured there in 1957.", that sounds like a good headline. She laughed as she walked to get into the car again. As she opened te door, the picture fell to the ground. She started the engine and started driving towards the mansion. ------ Veronica Swestock looked out the windows of the taxi she was sitting in. The plane had landed really late but she was eager to get her search started. She looked out in the night and saw nothing more but darkness. She leaned forward and was about to ask the driver if he could turn up the sound on the radio when something happened to it, some kind of disturbance. Veronica looked at the driver, that tried to change the channel but in vain, the same terrifying sound kept coming out of the speakers. " What is that?", she asked but the driver just shook his head. " I have no idea." Veronica was about to say something when she heard something in the background of the disturbance. can't...ever...hurt...me.... She looked back at the driver but he didn't seem like he had noticed it. Veronica looked at the radio again but she didn't hear anything. Soon the disturbance dissapeared. Veronica leaned back again and sighed. " God, that was disturbing." " Yeah, it's been doing that for a week now. Evertime I drive by the Langdon Hill Mansion." He saised his hand and shaked them while he laughed and said. " The haunted mansion." Veronica starred at him in the rear-view mirror. " What did you say?" " You don't know? The mansion up on Langdon Hill is said to be haunted. Well, I don't believe in that crap." Veronica faked a laugh. " Yeah, me neither." She paused. " You know what? I've always wanted to see a " haunted manison", you mind going back? I'll pay extra." The driver looked at her in the mirror. " Yeah sure.", he said as he smiled. When the taxi stopped at the bottom of the hill Veronica looked up at big black mansion at the top. She got out of the car and took her bag with her. She walked to the driver's door and knocked on the window. She gave the driver some money and asked him to waith there for her. After some grunts from the driver he decided to stay for some extra money. Veronica thanked him and started walking on the long road that led to the top of the hill when she noticed something on the ground. She bent down and picked it up. It was a polaroidpicture of the mansion. After she had looked closer at it she starred scared at the mansion and then started running towards it. " I hope it's not too late!" ------ So, what do you think?
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Post by mausbrucas on Sept 8, 2007 13:13:17 GMT -5
That was good V! UD soon!!!
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Post by Veronica on Sept 8, 2007 15:22:15 GMT -5
glad you like it:) like i said, getting good reviews from you means a lot:) i know you're not a bigbigbigbig snfan ( or are you ?:S ) but maybe you could check out the summary for the other snfic i ahve posted?
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Post by mausbrucas on Sept 8, 2007 16:04:30 GMT -5
glad you like it:) like i said, getting good reviews from you means a lot:) i know you're not a bigbigbigbig snfan ( or are you ?:S ) but maybe you could check out the summary for the other snfic i ahve posted? well, i actually do like the show. And i was really into it early in season 1, but then i got really busy and always missed it when it was on, so I got off track and couldn't catch up so I was lostby the end of the season. But when i first saw the trailers for it....I was like "wow...that looks awesome" and i did watch it every week for awhile, but like i said, i got lost. And though OTH is still my absolutel top fave, Supernatural isn't bad. Them Winchester boys are so, so, sooooo HOTTTTTTT!!!!LOL! (Hey, I bet you could make a banner with that text if you haven't already....you know....Them Winchester Boys are so, so HOTTTT!!!!! LOL
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Post by Veronica on Sept 8, 2007 17:00:11 GMT -5
oo i'll do that!
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Post by mausbrucas on Sept 8, 2007 17:06:18 GMT -5
oo i'll do that! LOL! Okay....guess you liekd that idea, huh? LOL Can;t wait to see it.
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Post by Veronica on Sept 8, 2007 17:09:47 GMT -5
yeah i did:) and you know the " can't ever forget" banner. i think i'll make a similar with both sn and oth:)
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Post by mausbrucas on Sept 8, 2007 17:21:39 GMT -5
yeah i did:) and you know the " can't ever forget" banner. i think i'll make a similar with both sn and oth:) cool oh yeah, that reminds me....I have to start posting Can't Ever Forget here too.... LOL. k, I;'ll do that today.
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Post by Veronica on Sept 8, 2007 17:23:54 GMT -5
great:) and when you get the time, can you read the summary for Diary of A Huntress? I know I'm nagging but I'd really like to get good response on it:)
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